Friday, February 24, 2012

I need someone to critique my query?

Dear Ms. Agent,



It鈥檚 been said that your life ain鈥檛 worth a damn unless you touch the souls of those you meet along the way.



Born on a once grand plantation in South Carolina, Horace鈥檚 path in life parallels that of a growing nation. Horace has lived a long life, fortunate to have befriended many legendary icons of the twentieth century. His cherished friends left an indelible foot print in what became our Nation鈥檚 most productive and turbulent era. They touched the souls of everyone they met, and future generations. Who鈥檚 soul had Horace touched? Where was his legacy? Would he be remembered long after he was gone? Does it really matter? One鈥檚 life isn鈥檛 measured by the breaths that you take, it is measured by the amount of times your breath has been taken away. Horace has lived a remarkable life. Judge for yourself. Count the times his breath has been taken away. Let him touch your soul.



Horace鈥檚 life has made a difference in all the souls he has met along the way.

T

he Last Chance is a 106,000 word historical fiction that follows the life of 115 year old Horace Chance from a barren stretch of dunes in North Carolina, where he meets a couple bicycle shop owners from Ohio that teach him all about flight, right on through to the 2008 presidential election.



His life also reflects the influences of lost friends that have brightened his journey and lost loved ones that made his life worth a damn and ultimately left him, The Last Chance



Regards,

AuthorI need someone to critique my query?
My grandmother passed away four days before her 107th birthday. The existence of a 115 year old man is therefore viable. A couple of World War I vets passed away this past year at 116. Nice concept. Good query.I need someone to critique my query?
If you can make the notion of a 115 year old man viable, it sounds like an interesting story.
This is a good query.
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