I need a good ending please,?

okay, well i've got this speech to do and it's about Harriet Tubman.



here it is :



Many of you may not have heard of Harriet Tubman but she certainly changed history and here鈥檚 why. She was born into slavery in about 1820 with the name of Araminta but she later changed it to Harriet. She had a very tough childhood and was always being beaten and because she had such a strong spirit she received a fractured skull as a result of it.

She was desperate to be free from slavery and was determined to escape for good. Eventually, Harriet did manage to escape and even though her brothers were nervous and immediately returned to the sugar plantations, she carried on nevertheless. She followed the North Star to get to her freedom, and when she finally arrived she went back straightaway to rescue her family along with 300 other slaves.

Harriet managed to change at least 300 lives of slaves who would never have experienced freedom if it wasn鈥檛 for Harriet. Everyone was very grateful and she was known as the 鈥楳oses of her people鈥?because her actions were just like his.

By freeing those slaves, it showed people that they were not going to stand for being slaves and that slavery should be abolished.





please feel free to comment on what ive written so far and what to change.



but i'm looking to a good ending to wrap it all up, maybe a rhetorical question too



thanks

xI need a good ending please,?
Here are my suggestions:

Many of you may not have heard of Harriet Tubman but she certainly changed history and here鈥檚 why.



Reworded.



Many of you may not have heard of Harriet Tubman but she played a pivotal role in history by becoming a conductor on the Underground Railroad.

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She had a very tough childhood and was always being beaten and because she had such a strong spirit she received a fractured skull as a result of it.



Reworded



She had a very tough childhood and was beaten and received a fractured skull as a result of one of those beatings. However, Harriet maintained her strong spirit.



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By freeing those slaves, it showed people that they were not going to stand for being slaves and that slavery should be abolished.



Reworded



In helping slaves find freedom it showed people that all people had the right to freedom and that the abolition of slavery was only fair and just.



Ending:



You may not have known who Harriet Tubman was and what she did for the slaves as a conductor of the Underground Railroad, but you cannot argue that what she did during her time was a glorious feet not only for her, as a woman, but for all mankind.
How about...

"Despite the facts that her bravery was shown even while she was solitary, her effort has not gone in vain. Would you risk your own life for the life of others?I need a good ending please,?
free the slaves
And then I woke up and it was all a dream.